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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
a short essay
I wrote a short essay.
I'd like you to check if there is any problem in my essay.Below is the essay.
If commercial whaling is banned completely, the number of whales will increase dramatically,
which could [ upset / destroy / disrupt ] the ecological balance in marine life.
For example, the number of small fish might decline dramatically.
Meanwhile, some fishermen might continue to hunt whales illegaly even if a ban has been imposed on whaling.
I'd like you to check if there is any problem in my essay.Below is the essay.
If commercial whaling is banned completely, the number of whales will increase dramatically,
which could [ upset / destroy / disrupt ] the ecological balance in marine life.
For example, the number of small fish might decline dramatically.
Meanwhile, some fishermen might continue to hunt whales illegaly even if a ban has been imposed on whaling.
Top answer
upset or disrupt are equally ok in this context. I wouldn't use 'dramatically' twice.
- upset or disrupt are equally ok in this context.
- I wouldn't use 'dramatically' twice.
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upset or disrupt are equally ok in this context.
I wouldn't use 'dramatically' twice.
I wouldn't use 'dramatically' twice.
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