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Wildblue Posted 12 years ago
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A sentence to be checked

Hi. Could you please check the following sentence?

"After one of the helicopters got us the ammunition and was to pick up a number of the injured and the killed, its rotor blade hit the hill next to the narrow landing space and was broken."
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"After one of the helicopters got us the ammunition and was to pick up a number of the injured and the killed, its rotor blade hit the hill next to the narrow landing space and was broken."


The bold part does not work.

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Thank you very much, Clive.

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