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Hly2004 Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
a sentence question
(3)Termination of a contract by one party except on the happening of an agreed event requires that reasonable notification be received by the other party and in agreement dispensing with notification is invalid if its operation would be unconscionable.
who can help me anylyse this sentence's structure ?(you can highlight different parts in different colours and add some details)
my answer is:
Termination
(of a contract by one party )
(except on the happening of an agreed event requires that reasonable notification be received by the other party and in agreement dispensing with notification)
is invalid
( if its operation would be unconscionable.)
but..what's the subject of "requires",is it
who can help me anylyse this sentence's structure ?(you can highlight different parts in different colours and add some details)
my answer is:
Termination
(of a contract by one party )
(except on the happening of an agreed event requires that reasonable notification be received by the other party and in agreement dispensing with notification)
is invalid
( if its operation would be unconscionable.)
but..what's the subject of "requires",is it
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my another answer is :
Termination
(of a contract by one party )
(except on the happening of an agreed event )
requires that reasonable notification be received
by the other party
and
in agreement dispensing with notificatio
Termination
(of a contract by one party )
(except on the happening of an agreed event )
requires that reasonable notification be received
by the other party
and
in agreement dispensing with notificatio
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Hello Hly2004
Don't write "in" for "an".
Termination of a contract by one party except on the happening of an agreed event requires that reasonable notification be received by the other party and an agreement dispensing with notification is invalid if its operation would be unconscionable.
paco
Don't write "in" for "an".
Termination of a contract by one party except on the happening of an agreed event requires that reasonable notification be received by the other party and an agreement dispensing with notification is invalid if its operation would be unconscionable.
paco
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That is shocking legal drafting. The second part makes no sense at all.
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Dear friends,
I have had experience of legal English. If I may be permitted to say so, I do not think it is a well written contract. It is perhaps not even English.
I have had experience of legal English. If I may be permitted to say so, I do not think it is a well written contract. It is perhaps not even English.
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