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Zhang Terry Posted 13 years ago
Science & IT

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Hi all,
I included this sentence in my statement of interest. Assistance is needed to correct the grammar or suggestion of its authentication. thanks a lot!

This technology significantly increases the democratization of the decision-making process via public participation and collaboration. Convinced of its great promise, I would like to continue this research in the doctoral dissertation and tackle the challenges faced by the existing framework for collaborative multicriteria decision analysis.
  

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This technology significantly increases the democratization of the decision-making process via public participation and collaboration. Convinced of its great promise, I would like to continue this research for my doctoral dissertation and tackle the challenges presented in the existing framework for collaborative multi-criteria decision analysis.

  • This technology significantly increases the democratization of the decision-making process via public participation and collaboration.
  • Convinced of its great promise, I would like to continue this research for my doctoral dissertation and tackle the challenges presented in the existing framework for collaborative multi-criteria decision analysis.
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This technology significantly increases the democratization of the decision-making process via public participation and collaboration. Convinced of its great promise, I would like to continue this research for my doctoral dissertation and tackle the challenges presented in the existing framework for collaborative multi-criteria decision analysis.

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