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Hamoon Mousavi Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

A sentence from my resume

In the following sentence I am not sure if I've got to use 'devoting' or 'devoted'. Moreover, if I change 'yet' to 'while' would the statement become clearer? Finally do I need an article before "flawless implementation"?

Exceeded peer expectations by strategically expanding the project scope yet devoted to flawless implementation and on-time delivery.

Thanks a lot
  

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Hamoon Mousavi In the following sentence It's not a sentence. It is a fragment or a bullet point. Hamoon Mousavi I am not sure if I've got to use 'devoting' or 'devoted'.

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  • Hamoon Mousavi In the following sentence It's not a sentence.
  • It is a fragment or a bullet point.
  • Hamoon Mousavi I am not sure if I've got to use 'devoting' or 'devoted'.
  • Devoted.
  • Your verbs are all in past time.
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Hamoon MousaviIn the following sentence
It's not a sentence. It is a fragment or a bullet point.
Hamoon MousaviI am not sure if I've got to use 'devoting' or 'devoted'.
Devoted. Your verbs are all in past time.
Hamoon MousaviMoreover, if I change 'yet' to 'while' would the statement become clearer?
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