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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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It is ironic. Because Caesar insists on going to the senate house, thinking that the conspirators will vanish after seeing his house, he is killed by the conspirators.


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anonymous Is it correct? No. It's nearly indecipherable.

  • anonymous Is it correct?
  • No.
  • It's nearly indecipherable.
  • For one thing the repetition of 'house' confuses things.
  • For another thing, it's unclear why he is killed because he insisted on going somewhere.
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anonymousIs it correct?

No. It's nearly indecipherable.

For one thing the repetition of 'house' confuses things.
For another thing, it's unclear why he is killed because he insisted on going somewhere.
For another thing, why would seeing a house cause anyone to vanish?

CJ

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