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Snuppelina Posted 14 years ago
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A sentence.

How can I paraphrase the following sentence to make it more coherent. Maybe native speakers can help me understand it. I'm particularty interested in grammar/punctuation:

Preliminary consideration, including optization of the reactor complex of moderators in which the cold moderator plays an important part, showed that 10 optimized moderators are preferable to solid methane if accounting all inputs - neutronic, thermal and radiation.
  

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snuppelina Preliminary consideration, including opti mi zation of the reactor complex of moderators in which the cold moderator plays an important part, showed that 10 optimized moderators are preferable to solid methane if accounting all inputs when taking all inputs into account - neutronic, thermal , and radiation. As shown. 'neutronic' seems wrong to me, but I have no technical expertise in your field of study, so I don't know the correct English word for that concept.

— CalifJim

  • snuppelina Preliminary consideration, including opti mi zation of the reactor complex of moderators in which the cold moderator plays an important part, showed that 10 optimized moderators are preferable to solid methane if accounting all inputs when taking all inputs into account - neutronic, thermal , and radiation.
  • As shown.
  • 'neutronic' seems wrong to me, but I have no technical expertise in your field of study, so I don't know the correct English word for that concept.
  • CJ
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snuppelinaPreliminary consideration, including optimization of the reactor complex of moderators in which the cold moderator plays an important part, showed that 10 optimized moderators are preferable to solid methane if accounting all inputs when taking all inputs into account - neutronic,
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