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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

A sense of humour

Hello

Could you please read and check my writing below?
I wish I would have known how to become a man of few words with a delightful dry sense of humour in my writings.

OK. Here is the paragraph:

Hello Dave. I had a dream that guys, Corey and we were all 18 and studying in our first years of high school in a suburb of Scotland. One day, you were running so hard that you fell and broke your big toe. I ran up to you, calling 911, but it didn’t work because I remembered we were not in the US. So, I had to fetch a qualified nurse to take care of you. That sounds really weird, though.

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Hello Dave. I had a dream that the guys, Corey, you and I were all 18 and studying in our first years of high school in a suburb of Scotland. One day, you were running so hard that you fell and broke your big toe. I ran up to you, calling 911, but it didn’t work because I remembered we were not in the US. So, I had to fetch a qualified nurse to take care of you. Tha
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A suburb of Scotland?
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Blue Jay A suburb of Scotland?
Yes. Odd. Yet I immediately accepted it as 'a suburb somewhere in Scotland'. Go figure.

Anyway it was in a dream. Maybe the grammar is slightly different in dreamland.

CJ
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Blue Jay A suburb of Scotland?
Perhaps just on the other side of Hadrian's Wall.
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AlpheccaStarsPerhaps just on the other side of Hadrian's Wall.
I'm sure the Scots wouldn't mind calling England a suburb of Scotland, but the English beg to differ.

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