A Sample of Theatre Script

Hello!

I was supposed to write a theatre sample for the six year-old children, who are EFL pupils, in order that they can act in a play at the end of the semester.

I’ve come up with the one below. Now I’d like to hear your suggestions for improving my sloppy sentences- besides, I would dearly love to hear some addition or removal that you might suggest. Because it looks rather dry, and it's not interesting!

NARRATOR: There is a Big Fish. She is very, very big.
And these are Small Fish. They are very, very small.
They lived in the deep blue sea.
The Small Fish were scared of the Big Blue Fish.

PART 1

BIG BLUE FISH ( in a loud voice ) : I’m hungry. I’m very, very hungry! Where are you, Small Red Fish?

SMALL RED FISH: Oh, HELP! HELP! HELP! Where can I hide? (Finds a Shell)

THE SHELL: Hey, Small Red Fish! Come under me. I can hide you!

BIG BLUE FISH ( looking around ) Where are you, small red fish? (Finds the Small Red Fish) Ah, there you are! I can see your tail.

NARRATOR: But Small Red Fish just escaped in time
( Small Red Fish swims away )
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PART 2

BIG BLUE FISH (in a loud voice ) : I’m hungry. I’m very, very hungry! Where are you, Small Green Fish?

SMALL GREEN FISH:  Oh, HELP! HELP! HELP! Where can I hide? ( Finds some seaweed)

THE SEAWEED: Hey, Small Green Fish! Come behind me. I can hide you!

BIG BLUE FISH: ( looking around ) Where are you, Small Green Fish? (Finds the Green Fish) Ah, there you are! I can see your tail.

NARRATOR: But Small Green Fish just escaped in time
( Small Green Fish swims away )
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PART 3

BIG BLUE FISH ( in a loud voice ) : I’m hungry. I’m very, very hungry! Where are you, Small Yellow Fish?

SMALL YELLOW FISH: Oh, HELP! HELP! HELP! Where can I hide? (Finds a Rock)

THE ROCK: Hey, Small Yellow Fish! Come behind me. I can hide you!

BIG BLUE FISH ( looking around ) Where are you, Small Yellow Fish? (Finds the Small Yellow Fish) Ah, there you are! I can see your tail.

NARRATOR: But Small Yellow Fish just escaped in time
( Small Yellow Fish swims away )

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PART 4

BIG BLUE FISH ( in a loud voice ) : I’m hungry. I’m very, very hungry! Where are you, Small Fishes?

ALL SMALL FISHES: Oh, HELP! HELP! HELP! Where can we hide? (Find an old boot)

THE OLD BOOT: Hey, Small Fishes! Come behind me. I can hide you!

BIG BLUE FISH ( looking around ) Where are you, Small Fishes? (Finds the Small Fish) Ah, there you are! I can see your tails.

SMALL FISHES (From behind the boot) Oh, No! Please, please, please don’t eat us!

BIG BLUE FISH: Eat you? Eat you? PUHAHAHA I am hungry. But I don’t want to eat YOU. You are too small!

SMALL FISHES: Oh, good. (Come out from behind the boot.)

BIG BLUE FISH: I’ve got a picnic. Come and have a picnic with me.

SMALL FISHES: OK!
 ( They sit down, open their lunch boxes and start eating sandwiches together.)

BIG BLUE FISHES AND SMALL FISHES: ( Together ) Hmmmm…. Yum-Yum-Yum!

NARRATOR: So Big Blue Fish and Small Fishes had a picnic together, and from that day they were best friends ever.