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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

A resume

Following is my oral presentation. Please help me to check if there's any problems with the grammar. Thanks for your kindly help!

Dear Sir
Please consider this letter which is an application for the PM position in your company. A resume of my education and previous work experiences is listed above. As you can see that I have PM , H/W design and system integration design experiences. Also, I passed the PMP certification test.

I have been doing my current job as a PM for about 6 years. Before this, the major jobs I worked for DELL and Quanta were being a PM as well.
Being a PM, my job is to plan schedules, control the cost, issue reports, solve problems and do risk assessment.........etc. Furthermore, I got management related training to enhance / improve my management skill while I was in DELL. Based on my background and overall working experiences, I have high confidence to be a good PM.

I would appreciate it if I have this opportunity to meet you in person. For further information, please do let me know.
  

Top answer

Hello Anon; A letter is not an application. Companies will have application forms for that purpose. An oral presentation is what you say in person.

  • Hello Anon; A letter is not an application.
  • Companies will have application forms for that purpose.
  • An oral presentation is what you say in person.
  • It is not a letter.
  • A letter can state an interest in a job posting, and request for interview.
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Hello Anon;

A letter is not an application. Companies will have application forms for that purpose.
An oral presentation is what you say in person. It is not a letter.

A letter can state an interest in a job posting, and request for interview.

Grammar points:
experience is generally singular. It refers to your positions before the current time.
"etc.."

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