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Lucas21c Posted 11 years ago
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Could you confirm whether the following sentence is okay? Thank you.

This is Joan Rowling's new released book which I bought at the book which is the biggest in this town.
  

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This is Joan Rowling's newly released boo k, which I bought at the biggest bookstore in this town.

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This is Joan Rowling's newly released book, which I bought at the biggest bookstore in this town.
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1. Then, how about "This is Joan Rowling's newly released book, which I bought at the bookstore which my cousin runs?"

2. Is this sentence, "He has two sons who are doctors who had served as an army surgeon during the Gulf War, from 2001 to 2003?"
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lucas21c1. Then, how about "This is Joan Rowling's newly released book, which I bought at the bookstore which my cousin runs?"
Two 'which's are poor style, that is all.
lucas21c2. Is this sentence, "He has two sons who are doctors who had served as army surgeons during the Gulf War from 2001 to 2003?"
The same

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