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TeacherJapan Posted 4 years ago
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A quote by Emerson

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We can only see what we are prepared to see. I think this is especially true when we have a negative frame of mind. When I couldn’t pass the entrance exam last year, I was not only angry at myself but also hard on my friends and family. Now I know how much they cared about me, but at that time, I was not ready to be grateful for their words of comfort and encouragement.

  

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The English and formatting are impeccable. I wonder if you missed the target, though. The topic is perception, and your conclusion is about gratitude.

  • The English and formatting are impeccable.
  • I wonder if you missed the target, though.
  • The topic is perception, and your conclusion is about gratitude.
  • I see what you mean, but I should be able to read what you mean.
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The English and formatting are impeccable. I wonder if you missed the target, though. The topic is perception, and your conclusion is about gratitude. I see what you mean, but I should be able to read what you mean.

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