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김성현 Posted 9 years ago
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A questions from "You can negotiate anything" by Herb Cohen.

Dear teachers:


The following is an excerpt from "You can negotiate anything" by Herb Cohen.

"Always think in terms of the specific objective or goal that you want achieved by the phone call."


I think the sentence above should be changed into

"Always think in terms of the specific objective or goal that you want to be achieved by the phone call."


What do you think of this?


Thanks and best regards,


David Kim


  

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"What do you think of this? I think that your version is inferior to the original.

  • "What do you think of this?
  • I think that your version is inferior to the original.
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???"Always think in terms of the specific objective or goal that you want achieved by the phone call."I think the sentence above should be changed into "Always think in terms of the specific objective or goal that you want to be achieved by the phone call."What do you think of this?

I think that your version is inferior to the original.

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