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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A question on how to avoid repetition
Dear all,
I need your help in the following writing.
The average energy intakes and caloric intake per weight (kcal/kg) of male athletes were 5344.6 kcal and 86.1 ?/?, respectively. The average energy intakes and caloric intake per weight (kcal/kg) of female athletes were 4332.3? and 72.7?/?, respectively.
At first, I thought 'those' but, sarting a sentence with 'those' dosen't look good choice.
And then, I thought 'The same measurements (indicators) of female...', something I can rephrase.
Can I have any good suggestion from all??
Thanks a lot
lee
I need your help in the following writing.
The average energy intakes and caloric intake per weight (kcal/kg) of male athletes were 5344.6 kcal and 86.1 ?/?, respectively. The average energy intakes and caloric intake per weight (kcal/kg) of female athletes were 4332.3? and 72.7?/?, respectively.
At first, I thought 'those' but, sarting a sentence with 'those' dosen't look good choice.
And then, I thought 'The same measurements (indicators) of female...', something I can rephrase.
Can I have any good suggestion from all??
Thanks a lot
lee
Top answer
7 kcal/kg.
- 7 kcal/kg.
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This is all you need:
The average energy (kcal) and caloric intakes per weight (kcal/kg) of male athletes were 5344.6 kcal and 86.1 kcal/kg respectively, while those of female athletes were 4332.3 kcal and 72.7 kcal/kg.
The average energy (kcal) and caloric intakes per weight (kcal/kg) of male athletes were 5344.6 kcal and 86.1 kcal/kg respectively, while those of female athletes were 4332.3 kcal and 72.7 kcal/kg.
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