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Train book Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

A question on grammar

Hi guys


I am wondering whether this sentence is grammatically correct:

"The decreased frequency of visiting our grandparents as well as the avoidance of their engagement in making important decisions of our lives are clear tokens of their decreased importance in our lives."


Thanks

  

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It would pass a grammar checker, but it is very far from elegant. The word usage is very unnatural.

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  • It would pass a grammar checker, but it is very far from elegant.
  • The word usage is very unnatural.
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It would pass a grammar checker, but it is very far from elegant. The word usage is very unnatural.

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