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Mihkel93 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
A question about the word order
Hi!
I have a question about the word order in the following sentence (I mean, is it okay to say it that way):
Horror, drama and comedy movies are equally preferred, thay are watched by 26%, 25% and 24% students accordingly.
Are there any better ways to say the sentence, taking into account that the main idea must stay the same?
I have a question about the word order in the following sentence (I mean, is it okay to say it that way):
Horror, drama and comedy movies are equally preferred, thay are watched by 26%, 25% and 24% students accordingly.
Are there any better ways to say the sentence, taking into account that the main idea must stay the same?
Top answer
Hi, You have incorrectly joined two separate sentences with a comma before 'they' (not thay ). Say 'respectively' instead of 'accordingly'. Clive
- Hi, You have incorrectly joined two separate sentences with a comma before 'they' (not thay ).
- Say 'respectively' instead of 'accordingly'.
- Clive
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Hi,
You have incorrectly joined two separate sentences with a comma before 'they' (not thay).
Say 'respectively' instead of 'accordingly'.
Clive
You have incorrectly joined two separate sentences with a comma before 'they' (not thay).
Say 'respectively' instead of 'accordingly'.
Clive
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