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Brenda1st Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

A question about percentage description.

Here is a sentence from a Chinese governmental report: " The per capita asset of China's top 500 top businesses is 40% those of the World's top 500. " Do they omit an "of " after "40%" ?
  

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Hi, This is a poorly written sentence. It's hard to understand on first reading. Here are a few problems.

  • Hi, This is a poorly written sentence.
  • It's hard to understand on first reading.
  • Here are a few problems.
  • Per capita is used for people, not for businesses Assets should be used in plural form in a context like this Top is repeated You don't need 'of'.
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Hi,

This is a poorly written sentence. It's hard to understand on first reading.
Here are a few problems.

Per capita is used for people, not for businesses

Assets should be used in p

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