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Savage38 Posted 4 years ago
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A proposal: Website improvements CAE

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Your company has a website, but it is old and not very user-friendly, so the director has sent you the following email:

We have received a number of complaints about our website from customers and the number of visitors to the website has fallen in recent months. Please could you draw up a proposal outlining your suggestions for how we can improve the site and I will share it at the next board meeting.
Write your proposal 220-260 words

I will be very thankful if you grade this proposal)))



This proposal is intended to highlight current problems with company's website and give ideas to improve the website interface for users comfort and company's success.


Firstly, website does not support cross platform using. As a result, users with mobile phones cannot use it in full. Additionally, the website's design so colourful, for me it's quite annoying. Moreover contacts button stashed in footer where not all users get into because of the innumerable amount of unreadable text about our products. The images' quality are irritating flaw. Have you ever seen them?


To solve these issues, I recommend taking up new web design team in the near future which would be able to fix cross platform layout. Also it would be great to have an opportunity to calculate our company's services. By the way, web design team should update our logo and look up to the European partner's web sites. It would be advantageous to set up customers' responses. It is recommended that language changing function need to have an essential translation. As a result, it would bring about sizeable impact for our sales around the world.


Taking all these points into consideration, from my view, these changes would increase total demand for our services all around the world. If the above-mentioned recommendations are followed, positive income will be astonishing in the future.

  

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Hello Savage38, I have given you extensive feedback on you previous posts. However, you gave no response or acknowledgement for my time and effort. So I will help more appreciative students.

  • Hello Savage38, I have given you extensive feedback on you previous posts.
  • However, you gave no response or acknowledgement for my time and effort.
  • So I will help more appreciative students.
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Hello Savage38,

I have given you extensive feedback on you previous posts. However, you gave no response or acknowledgement for my time and effort. So I will help more appreciative students.

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