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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
a pile of photos
Would you please be kind enough to help me correct the letter? Thanks!
After coming back from the trip to Vietnam, I was busy starting my work. So I didn’t find time to sort through a pile of photos I took in the tour. Now, I’m getting on track at work, so I have time and the mood to admire the photos. I’d like to present my appreciation to all of you because you are so nice and friendly even though we never met before. Thanks to your company that made the journey more pleasant and delightful. Maybe next time, I will visit Hu?, located in central Vietnam on the banks of the Perfume River, where its Complex of Hué Monuments has been a UNESCO World Heritage. Here are some photos which include your shots, and I should mail them back to you as a memory. In addition, I also add some pictures which I am satisfied with, I hope you will like them and give me some advice. I wish you all the best!
After coming back from the trip to Vietnam, I was busy starting my work. So I didn’t find time to sort through a pile of photos I took in the tour. Now, I’m getting on track at work, so I have time and the mood to admire the photos. I’d like to present my appreciation to all of you because you are so nice and friendly even though we never met before. Thanks to your company that made the journey more pleasant and delightful. Maybe next time, I will visit Hu?, located in central Vietnam on the banks of the Perfume River, where its Complex of Hué Monuments has been a UNESCO World Heritage. Here are some photos which include your shots, and I should mail them back to you as a memory. In addition, I also add some pictures which I am satisfied with, I hope you will like them and give me some advice. I wish you all the best!
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Hi That looks very good to me. I can't think of any correction Dave
- Hi That looks very good to me.
- I can't think of any correction Dave
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After returning from Vietnam trip, I got busy with my work. ... because you were so nice and friendly ... Thanks for your company .... on the banks of the river Perfume, where a UNESCO World Heritage site of Hue monuments is located. I am sending you all the photos with you in them, for you to keep as a memory of the time we spent together. In addition, I am also sending some other pictures I lik
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