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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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A pile of ***

Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable or better?

(1) After school on my way home, I trod on a pile of shit. It was a real bummer to me.

(2) On my way home after school, I trod on a pile of shit. It was a real bummer to me.

(3) On my way home after shcool, it was a real bummer to me to tread a pile of shit.
  

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Sorry, I bleep the words as written. (1) After school on my way home, I trod on a pile of filth. It was a real bummer to me.

  • Sorry, I bleep the words as written.
  • (1) After school on my way home, I trod on a pile of filth.
  • It was a real bummer to me.
  • (2) On my way home after school, I trod on a pile of filth.
  • It was a real bummer to me.
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Sorry, I bleep the words as written.

(1) After school on my way home, I trod on a pile of filth. It was a real bummer to me.

(2) On my way home after school, I trod on a pile of filth. It was a real bummer to me.

(3) On my way home after shcool, it was a real bummer to me to tread a pile of filth.

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