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Imantaghavi Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
A piece of writing
Hi,
It's near Norouz(Iranian new year) and I've prepared a piece of writing to congratulate the new year .So I'd be so grateful if anybody take look at it and correct it or elevate it grammatically.
"And I also hope to have more developed interrelations as a business family in the upcoming year."
This sentence is actually the continuation of a message.
Thank you in advance,
Iman
It's near Norouz(Iranian new year) and I've prepared a piece of writing to congratulate the new year .So I'd be so grateful if anybody take look at it and correct it or elevate it grammatically.
"And I also hope to have more developed interrelations as a business family in the upcoming year."
This sentence is actually the continuation of a message.
Thank you in advance,
Iman
Top answer
) as a business family in the upcoming year. I am not clear on what 'a business family' or 'interrelations' might consist of, Iman—but Happy New Year!
- ) as a business family in the upcoming year.
- I am not clear on what 'a business family' or 'interrelations' might consist of, Iman—but Happy New Year!
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And I also hope to develop greater/wider/broader interrelations / (contacts?) as a business family in the upcoming year.
I am not clear on what 'a business family' or 'interrelations' might consist of, Iman—but Happy New Year!
I am not clear on what 'a business family' or 'interrelations' might consist of, Iman—but Happy New Year!
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