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A piano teacher
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I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it. However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has improved apparently. Until now, I still enjoy playing the piano and I hope I can be a piano teacher one day to teach students who have a great interest in music like me.
I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it. However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has improved apparently. Until now, I still enjoy playing the piano and I hope I can be a piano teacher one day to teach students who have a great interest in music like me.
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Very good. I have underlined a wrong word choice and struck out an inappropriate phrase: I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it.
- Very good.
- I have underlined a wrong word choice and struck out an inappropriate phrase: I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl.
- Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it.
- However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has improved apparently .
- Until now, I still enjoy playing the piano , and I hope I can be a piano teacher one day to teach students who have a great interest in music like me.
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Very good. I have underlined a wrong word choice and struck out an inappropriate phrase:
I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it. However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has improved apparently.Until now, I still enjoy playi
I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it. However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has improved apparently.
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I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it. However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has apparently improvedapparently. Until now, I still enjoyed playing the
I have enjoyed playing the piano since I was a little girl. Because I didn't play it very well at first, my family thought I would soon give up playing it. However, I practiced playing the piano every day and my skill has apparently improved
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