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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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I'm trying to write the title of an article:
"effective dietary intake on the incidence of breast cancer in women"
The article talks about the dietary intake that causes breast cancer. Does the title sounds OK?
Thank you!
"effective dietary intake on the incidence of breast cancer in women"
The article talks about the dietary intake that causes breast cancer. Does the title sounds OK?
Thank you!
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No, that doesn't work for me at all. gillyflower The article talks about the dietary intake that causes breast cancer. "
- No, that doesn't work for me at all.
- gillyflower The article talks about the dietary intake that causes breast cancer.
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No, that doesn't work for me at all.
Also, what do you mean by "effective?"
gillyflowerThe article talks about the dietary intake that causes breast cancer.What do you mean by "dietary intake?" Do you simply mean "food items?"
Also, what do you mean by "effective?"
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teechrWhat do you mean by "dietary intake?" Do you simply mean "food items?"yes, this is a technical term.
teechrAlso, what do you mean by "effective?"I want to say the sentence "The dietary intake that may influence the incidence of breast cancer in women." in a topic format.
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The effect of dietary intake on the incidence of breast cancer in women
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