Which sentence is correct?
1. In all civilizations, articles are consumed that have no nutrient value but make the food more attractive, or give pleasure. Spices, herbs, vinegar and pickles are used for this purpose.
2. In all civilizations, articles that have no nutrient value but make the food more attractive, or give pleasure are consumed . Spices, herbs, vinegar and pickles are used for this purpose.
My answer:
I go for No. 2. Am I right
Omar Ahmed I go for No. 2. I'd choose 1.
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Omar AhmedI go for No. 2.
I'd choose 1.
that have no nutrient value but make the food more attractive or give pleasure is called a heavy clause. (It's long. It has a lot of words. So it's "heavy".)
We don't usually put a heavy clause in its normal position when we have only a few words left in the sentence to complete the thought