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What are the mistakes in the following sentence?
How beautiful it is to sit with myself thinking holding the pen in my hand and writing words expressing what moves in my mind from opinions about this subject.
In fact, I wrote this sentence to start a paragraph on modern technology. My teacher was not satisfied with what I wrote, so I hope you tell me what mistakes I made .
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How beautiful it is to sit by myself , thinking , holding my the pen in my hand and writing words expressing what moves in my mind from opinions about this subject . I have added edits in bold. In addition, the meaning of the part in italics is unclear.
- How beautiful it is to sit by myself , thinking , holding my the pen in my hand and writing words expressing what moves in my mind from opinions about this subject .
- I have added edits in bold.
- In addition, the meaning of the part in italics is unclear.
- Perhaps you mean this?
- .
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How beautiful it is to sit by myself, thinking, holding my the pen in my hand and writing words expressing what moves in my mind from opinions about this subject.
I have added edits in bold. In addition, the meaning of the part in italics is unclear. Perhaps you mean this?
. . . words which express my thoughts and o
0Omar AhmedHow beautiful it is to sit with myself, thinking and holding the pen in my hand, commencing to write words expressing what moves my mind and my opinions about the topic at hand.
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