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Shoaib Bin Rashid Posted 11 years ago
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a perfect article on street cricket, isnt it? plaese check this out ?

street cricket of bd be like some seemingly poor ineptitudes playing on the asphalts for a certain pleasurable moment surrounded by apartments where they dont belong and hurdled by people who pass by clumsily because they dont want to get hurt. They do enjoy little too much with alot of arrogancy in spite of being good friends to one another. Maybe its bliss for them. Uncertainty the general people get provoked by their drastic shots. But always they find a way out, sometimes they flee! That's the only way out when people cant endure the pain. Eventually they do rejoice and wish to a cricketer someday.
  

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Shoaib Bin Rashid a perfect article on street cricket, isnt it? Not at all; it hardly makes sense.

— Mister Micawber

  • Shoaib Bin Rashid a perfect article on street cricket, isnt it?
  • Not at all; it hardly makes sense.
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Shoaib Bin Rashid a perfect article on street cricket, isnt it?
Not at all; it hardly makes sense.
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Can you please correct it?
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I don't think so; it's a mess. What does 'bd' mean?! You need to check the text yourself carefully and then post a revision.
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street cricket of be like some seemingly poor ineptitudes playing on the asphalts for a certain pleasurable moment surrounded by apartments where they dont belong and hurdled by people who pass by clumsily because they dont want to get hurt. They(cricketer) do enjoy the game little too much with alot of arrogancy in spite of being good friends to one another. Maybe its bliss for them. Uncertainty
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Shoaib Bin Rashidstreet cricket of be like
You didn't make very many changes. "A mess" means that there are many many errors.
Please follow this advice, again:
Mister MicawberYou need to check the text yourself carefully and then post a revision.
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What else i would do? Discard it? Emotion: crying please try to help me as far as u can :/
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street cricket of be like (not an inflected verb!!) some seemingly poor ineptitudes (Ineptitude is not a person) playing on the asphalts (?streets) for a certain pleasurable moment surrounded by apartments where they
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I did what i could by your advice even though its pretty hard to get things the way you wrote it. Anyways i can't just thank you for what you did! You have to wish a favor from me and im going to do my best MASTER :V
HERE IS THE CORRECTED FORM:-
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Street cricket is like , some seemingly poor ineptitudes playing on the asphalts for a certain pleasurable moment surrounded by apartments where they don't belong and hurdled(people become their obstacles) by people who pass by clumsily. Because they don't want to get hurt. They(cricketer) do enjoy the game little too much with a lot of arrogancy(they fight as they are kids with different mind) in
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I could not understand a lot of the text, but here is my best guess.

Street cricket seems like some inept players playing on the roads only for a certain pleasurable moment. They are surrounded by apartment blocks where they don't live and obstructed by people who pass by, dodging them as they play because they don't want to get hurt. They enjoy the game a little too much and play with a
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