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A passive government

I am discussing an economic policies and if you see any mistakes, please correct me.

A passive government does not intervene in the market because it believes that the more government intervene in the market, the less freedom a market has. A passive government weighs only the economic efficiency, ignoring the equal distribution of the wealth.
  

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One problem is underlined: A passive government does not intervene in the market because it believes that the more government intervene in the market, the less freedom a market has. A passive government weighs only the economic efficiency, ignoring the equal distribution of the wealth. You may want to consider the adjective 'laissez-faire'.

  • One problem is underlined: A passive government does not intervene in the market because it believes that the more government intervene in the market, the less freedom a market has.
  • A passive government weighs only the economic efficiency, ignoring the equal distribution of the wealth.
  • You may want to consider the adjective 'laissez-faire'.
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One problem is underlined:

A passive government does not intervene in the market because it believes that the more government intervene in the market, the less freedom a market has. A passive government weighs only the economic efficiency, ignoring the equal distribution of the wealth.

You may want to consider the adjective 'laissez-faire'.
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Do I have to add ' the' in front of government.. such as .. the more government intervene... ?
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No. Subject-verb agreement. Choose 'government intervenes' or 'governments intervene'.

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