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Ellisa Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A paragraph of an essay

Hello lovely teachers~

I'm writing an essay on a specific book and here is a paragraph.

Any grammatical correction is welcomed^^^^^

Thanks in advance!



In Korea, just because I'm not a native speaker, it seems a matter of course (I mean, it seems fair! ) getting lower salary than a native speaker. I somewhat believe that natives are far better in English abilities. I, however, was overlooking 'training' and 'experience' which are regarded as the most important qualification for a teacher. If I work hard on training how to teach students and trying to have lots of experience, I might become a nonnative English-speaking teacher who surpasses NESTs. Then one question is remained. When I visited Jowon middle school as a Korean Interpretation Volunteer of Suwon Youth Center, there was a student who have lived in USA for 5 years. Needless to say, her pronunciation was far more fluent than that of her English teacher's and mine. I imagined what if the rest of students in the class look down on their English teacher because of the teacher's different way of speaking? (Can 'pronunciation' be replaced by 'different way of speaking' ? ) What can the teacher do when the student complain about teacher's not native-like pronunciation?
  

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Highlighted a few glaring issues for you to fix. In Korea, just because I'm not a native speaker, it seems a matter of course (I mean, it seems fair! ) getting lower salary than a native speaker.

  • Highlighted a few glaring issues for you to fix.
  • In Korea, just because I'm not a native speaker, it seems a matter of course (I mean, it seems fair!
  • ) getting lower salary than a native speaker.
  • I somewhat believe that natives are far better in English abilities.
  • I, however, was overlooking 'training' and 'experience' which are regarded as the most important qualification for a teacher.
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Highlighted a few glaring issues for you to fix.



In Korea, just because I'm not a native speaker, it seems a matter of course (I mean, it seems fair! ) getting lower salary than a native speaker. I somewhat believe that natives are far better in English abilities. I, however, was over

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