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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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A paragraph for proofreading
Hi,
I need the paragraph below to be reviewed:
"Studies have shown that the lack of key nutrients have similar effect as radiation in the destruction of nucleic acids and the incidence of cancer and breast cancer. Accordingly, based on available evidence, both deficiency and overtaking of macro and micro nutrients are totally related to the incidence of cancer diseases and breast cancer, and the total calorie intake and the balanced proportion of nutrients plays an important role in this regard."
Thank you!
I need the paragraph below to be reviewed:
"Studies have shown that the lack of key nutrients have similar effect as radiation in the destruction of nucleic acids and the incidence of cancer and breast cancer. Accordingly, based on available evidence, both deficiency and overtaking of macro and micro nutrients are totally related to the incidence of cancer diseases and breast cancer, and the total calorie intake and the balanced proportion of nutrients plays an important role in this regard."
Thank you!
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Studies have shown that the lack of key nutrients have has a similar effect as radiation in on the destruction of nucleic acids and on the incidence of cance r, and including breast cancer. Accordingly, based on available evidence, both deficiency and surplus overtaking of macro and micro nutrients are totally strongly related to the incidence of various cancer s , including diseases and breast cancer, and the total calorie intake and the balanced proportion of nutrients pla y an important role in this regard.
- Studies have shown that the lack of key nutrients have has a similar effect as radiation in on the destruction of nucleic acids and on the incidence of cance r, and including breast cancer.
- Accordingly, based on available evidence, both deficiency and surplus overtaking of macro and micro nutrients are totally strongly related to the incidence of various cancer s , including diseases and breast cancer, and the total calorie intake and the balanced proportion of nutrients pla y an important role in this regard.
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Studies have shown that the lack of key nutrients have has a similar effect as radiation in on the destruction of nucleic acids and on the incidence of cancer, and including breast cancer. Accordingly, based on available evidence, both deficiency and surplus overtaking of macro and micro nutrients are totall
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