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TeacherJapan Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A paragraph about One Piece

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My favorite manga is ”One Piece.” The story is basically about a boy named Ruffy striving hard to achieve his dream of becoming the king of pirates. What fascinates me most about the story is that he and his crew members always work together to fight with their greatest enemies. There are so many obstacles along the way, but they manage to overcome them by helping each other in a pinch. This manga makes me aware of the importance of friendship and gives me the energy to keep trying without giving up.

  

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teacherJapan fight with their greatest enemies. The second word is superfluous.

  • teacherJapan fight with their greatest enemies.
  • The second word is superfluous.
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teacherJapanfight with their greatest enemies.

The second word is superfluous.

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teacherJapanto keep trying without giving and not give up.
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his name is Luffy not Ruffy Emotion: smile

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