A paragraph: A place you like

Hi, I have the next exercise, would you mind to check it?

Your teacher wants you to write about a place you like. Write about

• where the place is
• why you like the place.

Write 30-40 words.

My answer:

Speaking of my favorite place I believe it would be the street where I grew up. There I spent a lot of time with my family and friends. It is the place where I left my best memories.

Thanks!