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Avid learner Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

A "noun" of

Hi,

Is the preposition "of" being used correctly in the following passage?

The Ghost of Christmas Past is a reminder of memories long forgotten. Memories that act as a justification for Scrooge’s present callousness. The Ghost of Christmas Present is a revealer of the unseen realities. Realities which provides him with a contradiction for his present opinion. The Ghost of Christmas Future is a herald of perdition yet to come. The prospect of future perdition provides him with a remedy for his present indifference.

Thanks, A.L.
  

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It looks good to me. "

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It looks good to me. The only thing that's a bit jarring is "a revealer of the unseen realities." It would sound better as "a revealer of unseen realities."

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