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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

A notice

Please help me to correct this notice, thanks.

To whom it may concerned,

Holidays for Chinese New Year

In order to celebrate the coming Chinese New year, our tuition centre will be closed from 14-2-10 to 21-2-10. Tuition classses will be reopened 22-2-10 (Monday). Please take note of the information.

Happy new year to all !!
  

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To whom it may concern, Holidays for Chinese New Year In order to celebrate the forthcoming Chinese New year, our tuition centre will be closed from 14-2-10 to 21-2-10. Tuition classes will be recommence Monday the 22nd February. Happy new year to all !!

— Dave Phillips

  • To whom it may concern, Holidays for Chinese New Year In order to celebrate the forthcoming Chinese New year, our tuition centre will be closed from 14-2-10 to 21-2-10.
  • Tuition classes will be recommence Monday the 22nd February.
  • Happy new year to all !!
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To whom it may concern,

Holidays for Chinese New Year

In order to celebrate the forthcoming Chinese New year, our tuition centre will be closed from 14-2-10 to 21-2-10. Tuition classes will be recommence Monday the 22nd February.

Happy new year to all !!
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How about If I say:

To whom it may concern ,

Holidays for Chinese New Year

In order to celebrate the upcoming Chinese New year, our tuition centre will be closed from 14-2-10 to 21-2-10. Tuition classes will resume on 22-2-10 (Monday). Please take note of the holiday dates.



Happy New Year to all!!
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That ok but I would change the word 'the' in the last sentence to these.
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