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Asta Maria Posted 9 years ago
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Is this line grammatically correct and make sense?

When mystery and myth surround them, fear changes everything

  

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Well, if this is part of a poem, yes. But if it's in expository writing, it doesn't really get the message across. "

  • Well, if this is part of a poem, yes.
  • But if it's in expository writing, it doesn't really get the message across.
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Well, if this is part of a poem, yes. But if it's in expository writing, it doesn't really get the message across. For expository writing, I'd say "When people cling to mysteries and myths, the fear these engender can make them irrational."

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