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Antonija Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary

A meeting proposal

Hello,

Can you please comment on these two sentences. Is the proposal all right or should I change something. It is a sort of an intent letter for collaboration between the two firms.

We are interested in collaboration and in that respect I would like to propose a meeting on 20th May 2014 in XY. You are certainly free to come and visit us at our clinic in Slovenia so you can see for yourself our state-of-the art equipment, modern facilities and meet our cordial staff.

Thank you in advance
Antonija
  

Top answer

We are interested in collaboration, and we would like to propose a meeting on May 20th in XY. You are also invited to visit us at our clinic in Slovenia to meet our friendly staff and see our state-of-the art equipment and modern facilities.

— Mister Micawber

  • We are interested in collaboration, and we would like to propose a meeting on May 20th in XY.
  • You are also invited to visit us at our clinic in Slovenia to meet our friendly staff and see our state-of-the art equipment and modern facilities.
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We are interested in collaboration, and we would like to propose a meeting on May 20th in XY. You are also invited to visit us at our clinic in Slovenia to meet our friendly staff and see our state-of-the art equipment and modern facilities.
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Many thanks, Mister Micawber. It's nice to see familiar names on the forum after all these years.
Kind regards
Antonija
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Antonija It's nice to see familiar names on the forum after all these years.
Yours, too, Antonija.
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