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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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A man who loves and cares for himself

a friend of mine who runs online business asked me this expression.

"A man who loves and cares for himself". He mainly sells men's clothes on his website and is looking for

a nice statement which will catch customer's attention. If the sentence sounds awkward, please correct it for

him. Thanks guys. Have a great day.
  

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The sentence sounds VERY awkward and very narcissistic. I do not think that your friend would want to say that he sells products to men that love themselves. " It is unclear what "cares for himself" actually means.

— JohnParis

  • The sentence sounds VERY awkward and very narcissistic.
  • I do not think that your friend would want to say that he sells products to men that love themselves.
  • " It is unclear what "cares for himself" actually means.
  • Does it mean that he goes to the gym to keep himself in shape?
  • Does it mean that he uses products to care for his hair or skin?
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The sentence sounds VERY awkward and very narcissistic.

I do not think that your friend would want to say that he sells products to men that love themselves.

The closest I can come to providing you with a sentence similar to the one you request would be:

"A man who cares for himself and takes pride in his appearence."

It is unclear what "cares for himself" actua
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