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Grammar

A mail for your friend who is in hospital and could not join the match with the team

Dear john,

I’m so sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you are better now and it is not too boring in hospital.

I just want to let u know that our team won yesterday. It was an amazing match like your expectation. The score was 3-2 for our team. I thought we ended in the a draw, but in last minutes, Sean made us surprised for scoring a final goal. I couldn’t describe my feeling at that time.

Morover, the weather was not good. It was raining like dogs and cats, so that the ground was muddy and wet. It was terrible to start. The team tried their best . That’s the reason we believe we should share the champion for u who always give us quietly support and dedication as a special present.

Let us know when you are going home and we will arrange for someone to bring you to watch the next game. The rest of the team send their regards and we all wish you a speedy recovery.

Best wishes,

Jean.

  

Top answer

) ‘like your expectation’ = ‘as you predicted’ ‘I thought we would end in the a draw; but in the last minutes, Sean made us surprised us by scoring the final goal. ‘Moreover’ (spelling). ‘like dogs and cats’ should be ‘ like cats and dogs’.

— Wilpeter

  • ) ‘like your expectation’ = ‘as you predicted’ ‘I thought we would end in the a draw; but in the last minutes, Sean made us surprised us by scoring the final goal.
  • ‘Moreover’ (spelling).
  • ‘like dogs and cats’ should be ‘ like cats and dogs’.
  • ‘to start’ should be ‘at the start’ ‘champion for u’ = ‘win with you’ ‘who always give us quietly’ = ‘who always gave us quiet’
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Presuming that you want suggested corrections, here are some changes I recommend:

‘let u know’ = ‘let you know’ (Since you used ‘you’ elsewhere, it makes it consistent.)

‘like your expectation’ = ‘as you predicted’

‘I thought we would end in the a draw; but in the last minutes, Sean made us surprised us by scoring the final go

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