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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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A lunch and a school
Hi. Are these correct?
1. When he was twelve, he attended a middle school in XXX and another middle school in XXX short after, and finally transferring to the middle school he graduated from when he just turned thirteen, in January of 19XX.
2. He ate a lunch at eleven and another lunch at noon. So we we can say he ate two lunches that day. But that was strange since he usually eats lunch at noon and usually has only one lunch a day.
1. When he was twelve, he attended a middle school in XXX and another middle school in XXX short after, and finally transferring to the middle school he graduated from when he just turned thirteen, in January of 19XX.
2. He ate a lunch at eleven and another lunch at noon. So we we can say he ate two lunches that day. But that was strange since he usually eats lunch at noon and usually has only one lunch a day.
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1. When he was twelve, he attended middle schools in *** and ***, and then in January of *** , when he had just turned thirteen, he transferred to the middle school he graduated from. 2.
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- When he was twelve, he attended middle schools in *** and ***, and then in January of *** , when he had just turned thirteen, he transferred to the middle school he graduated from.
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- He ate one lunch at eleven and another lunch at noon , so we we can say he ate two lunches that day.
- But that was strange , since he usually eats only one lunch a day, at noon.
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1. When he was twelve, he attended middle schools in *** and ***, and then in January of ***, when he had just turned thirteen, he transferred to the middle school he graduated from.
2. He ate one lunch at eleven and another lunch at noon, so we we can say he ate two lunches that day. But that was strange, since he usually eats only one lunch
1. When he was twelve, he attended middle schools in *** and ***, and then in January of ***, when he had just turned thirteen, he transferred to the middle school he graduated from.
2. He ate one lunch at eleven and another lunch at noon, so we we can say he ate two lunches that day. But that was strange, since he usually eats only one lunch
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Both sentences are quite confusing because there are many repetitions of the same words. Try:
1. When he was twelve, he attended three middle schools in succession: one in ***, another in ***, and the last in ***. In Janaury of ***, when he was thirteen, he finally graduated from ***.
2. He ate at eleven and another at noon, so we can say he had two lunches that day, but this is
1. When he was twelve, he attended three middle schools in succession: one in ***, another in ***, and the last in ***. In Janaury of ***, when he was thirteen, he finally graduated from ***.
2. He ate at eleven and another at noon, so we can say he had two lunches that day, but this is
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