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Kawthar.K. Posted 17 years ago
A love poem?
Everytime I go to sleep
I think that sleep will ease the pain
But everyday when I wake up
I always feel quite the same
In my mind, I have made up
I am the only one to blame
For this separation is killing me
And in my head I feel deranged
In my heart I feel such loss
Even the deepest words won't explain
So many talks that we have had
Now it is all gone in vain
But for what cause should we give up
We've restrained ourselves with this love-chain
Please, my love, don't lose hope
Just believe and have some faith
You be the only one I've loved this much
Now tell me that you're game
Because with you, I am in love
You've made my life FAR from being plain
I miss you loads and I hope you know,
that all that crosses my mind is your name.
Please, take the time to read and tell me what you think. I'd love to know, even if you think it's corny
I think that sleep will ease the pain
But everyday when I wake up
I always feel quite the same
In my mind, I have made up
I am the only one to blame
For this separation is killing me
And in my head I feel deranged
In my heart I feel such loss
Even the deepest words won't explain
So many talks that we have had
Now it is all gone in vain
But for what cause should we give up
We've restrained ourselves with this love-chain
Please, my love, don't lose hope
Just believe and have some faith
You be the only one I've loved this much
Now tell me that you're game
Because with you, I am in love
You've made my life FAR from being plain
I miss you loads and I hope you know,
that all that crosses my mind is your name.
Please, take the time to read and tell me what you think. I'd love to know, even if you think it's corny
Top answer
Hey, i really loved it! who wrote it? i really liked it.
- Hey, i really loved it!
- who wrote it?
- i really liked it.
- I don't think it's corny but well that's my opinion and it's quite subjective.
- Good luck Rootless tree
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Hey, i really loved it! who wrote it? i really liked it. I don't think it's corny but well that's my opinion and it's quite subjective.
Good luck
Rootless tree
Good luck
Rootless tree
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Oh you doooooooo?!!
I wrote it last night, I was feeling pretty crappy
But hey! Your feedback is a total booster!
Thank you!
I wrote it last night, I was feeling pretty crappy
But hey! Your feedback is a total booster!
Thank you!
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The first four lines are so me, although I am planning revenge against her.
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