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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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A lot of positive, upbeat, (and?) even fun songs?

Hi. Should there be the conjunction "and" before the word "even" in this sentence? Thank you in advance.

There are a lot of positive, upbeat, and even fun songs available.

How about this? Shouldn't there be the conjunction "and" before the word "even" here too?

A lot of positive, upbeat, (and?) fun songs seem to be available here.
  

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The first sentence should not have the word "even" in it. Songs that are positive and upbeat should be fun in their own right, but the word "even" means that despite being positive and upbeat, these songs are fun, which is contradictory. " The second sentence is not right.

  • The first sentence should not have the word "even" in it.
  • Songs that are positive and upbeat should be fun in their own right, but the word "even" means that despite being positive and upbeat, these songs are fun, which is contradictory.
  • " The second sentence is not right.
  • The word "seem" is not correct in this situation - and the word "even" is not right here, as in the first sentence.
  • In the context of songs, there cannot be "seeming" to be positive, upbeat, and fun.
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The first sentence should not have the word "even" in it. Songs that are positive and upbeat should be fun in their own right, but the word "even" means that despite being positive and upbeat, these songs are fun, which is contradictory. The sentence should be, for example: "There are a lot of positive, upbeat, and fun songs available."

The second sentence is not right. The word "see

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