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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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However, the first year of the course was not successfully completed by me as a result of my disabilities, namely my having a stammer, anxiety and depression, being made significantly worse by the death of my father in January 2015.
However, the first year of the course was not successfully completed by me as a result of my disabilities, namely my having a stammer, anxiety and depression, being made significantly worse by the death of my father in January 2015.
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Anonymous A long passive sentence No! Especially not with a personal pronoun as agent. However, I did not complete the first year of the course as a result of my disabiliti es: my stammer, anxiety and depression were made significantly worse by the death of my father in January 2015.
- Anonymous A long passive sentence No!
- Especially not with a personal pronoun as agent.
- However, I did not complete the first year of the course as a result of my disabiliti es: my stammer, anxiety and depression were made significantly worse by the death of my father in January 2015.
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AnonymousA long passive sentenceNo! Especially not with a personal pronoun as agent.
However, I did not complete the first year of the course as a result of my disabilities: my stammer, anxiety and depression were made significantly worse by the death of my father in January 2015.
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