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Avid learner Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

A little help, please

Hi,

Is the following sentence correct?

"Malicious machinations which are contrived to serve flawed perspectives zealously are tragedies that litter the pages of history throughout the ages."

Thanks, AL
  

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avid learner Is the following sentence correct? As good grammar, it will pass. As good writing, it fails miserably.

— Mister Micawber

  • avid learner Is the following sentence correct?
  • As good grammar, it will pass.
  • As good writing, it fails miserably.
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avid learnerIs the following sentence correct?
As good grammar, it will pass. As good writing, it fails miserably.
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Mister Micawber As good writing, it fails miserably.
Why?
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avid learnerWhy?
It is verbose and pompously tries to use too many big words.
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