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Akdom Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

A little grammar check

The Sumerian people created an entirely new culture, heralded by revolutionary development. The invention of cuneiform script, 3000 years before Christ, and the culture growth that resulted from the invention of a written language, was to reach its pinnacle in Nebuchadnezzar’s vast empire of .



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Hi Akdom, You need an "a" before "revolutionary. Maybe this: The Sumerian people created an entirely new culture, heralded by a revolutionary development: the invention of cuneiform script, 3000 years before Christ. The cultural growth that resulted from the invention of a written language was to reach its pinnacle in Nebuchadnezzar’s vast empire of Babylon.

  • Hi Akdom, You need an "a" before "revolutionary.
  • Maybe this: The Sumerian people created an entirely new culture, heralded by a revolutionary development: the invention of cuneiform script, 3000 years before Christ.
  • The cultural growth that resulted from the invention of a written language was to reach its pinnacle in Nebuchadnezzar’s vast empire of Babylon.
  • What is "cuneiform script"?
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Hi Akdom,

You need an "a" before "revolutionary.

Maybe this:

The Sumerian people created an entirely new culture, heralded by a revolutionary development: the invention of cuneiform script, 3000 years before Christ. The cultural growth that resulted from the invention of a written language was to reach its pinnacle in Nebuchadnezzar’s vast empire of Babylon.

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