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Akdom Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

A little grammar check


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Further, there is a new set of storylines emerging--one in which the media is treating itself as the news by commenting and critiquing itself and its various members. One prime example showed up in Wednesday's Los Angeles Times, where columnist James Rainey ridiculed radio station KFI's "John and Ken Show" for its perspective on these political matters. If our national economic woes aren't enough of an issue, I guess now we get to read and watch those in the media going after each other.

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Further, there is a new set of storylines emerging--one in which the media is treating itself as the news by commenting and critiquing itself and its various members. One prime example showed up in Wednesday's Los Angeles Times, where columnist James Rainey ridiculed radio station KFI's "John and Ken Show" for its perspective on these political matters, as if our national economic woes aren't enough of an issue. I guess now we get to read and watch those in the media going after each other.

Is sentence 1 grammatically correct? I did some modifications on sentence 2 there. What do you guys think?
  

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akdom Is sentence 1 grammatically correct? It's more than one sentence. Yes, they are correct.

— CalifJim

  • akdom Is sentence 1 grammatically correct?
  • It's more than one sentence.
  • Yes, they are correct.
  • akdom I did some modifications on sentence 2 there.
  • Why?
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akdomIs sentence 1 grammatically correct?
It's more than one sentence. Yes, they are correct.
akdomI did some modifications on sentence 2 there.
Why? James Rainey didn't ridicule the station as if our woes are not enough of an issue. That's not what the original meant.

The part about our economic woes is logical
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