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Everything for everybody - just for fun

Bored of doing the same thing over and over? Willing to teach your children what real fun is? Wait no more! Next Saturday, right after lunch, the Tamford Towers Adventure Park opens its gates - for everybody.
Just name it and they have it: every thing to make you feel gleefully for hours, just like flying in Neverland - forever a kid and with continuous flow of enjoyment! Ever wanted to have a bash at that crazy ride your parents forbid you when you were a kid or are you up for pure adrenaline? There's a nifty range of ten rides of which you can choose: from the somehow dull traditional water splash to the insane 'Screwball' or for those sure they won't get scared out of their wits - the insane 'Abyss'-just like flying without a parachute. Always getting bugged by your toddler about going to the country to see farm animals? Just visit 'Uncle Ted's Farmyard' and your kids will never again need a biology book to name the animals.
Of course they made sure you won't starve nor waste time looking round for a toilet-there are lots of them! And, if parents feel like enjoying a little bit of freedom they can always let their kids at one of those huge playgrounds-they're so colourful even I would take a stroll there.
Don't just stay there looking at your pocket! They have a so-called family pack, and that means lower prices, if they could've lowered them more than this! So hurry up and erase those plans for Saturday from your agenda: you'll be at Tamford Towers Adventure Park. Don't forget to buy souvenirs from their little shops with plenty of interesting stuff!