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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

a list of 2 -ing modifiers that modify the main clause

Hello, can anyone help tell me whether the following sentence is grammatically correct? I have a main clause that i want to modify with two separate -ing modifiers.

I managed and reported on the main ERP project portfolios, including the risk engine projects, overseeing and supporting all projects throughout the project life-cycle, ensuring that deliverables were completed within agreed scope, quality, budget, and time-scale.
  

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Hello again. I am just reposting the problematic sentence in a slightly more clear version. Any help would be much appreciated.

— Anonymous

  • Hello again.
  • I am just reposting the problematic sentence in a slightly more clear version.
  • Any help would be much appreciated.
  • Again, I am trying to modify the entire main close with two -ing modifiers following it.
  • I managed and reported on the firm's ERP project portfolios, including the risk engine projects, overseeing and supporting the projects throughout the entire project life-cycle, (" AND" instead of , ?
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Hello again. I am just reposting the problematic sentence in a slightly more clear version. Any help would be much appreciated. Again, I am trying to modify the entire main close with two -ing modifiers following it.

I managed and reported on the firm's ERP project portfolios, including the risk engine projects, overseeing and supporting the projects throughout the entire project life-cyc
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