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Angliholic Posted 16 years ago
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A line/thread-broken kite

My life as a boy was like a line-broken kite. It's gone so far away that I can't recall what I was like!

Hi,

I wrote the above on my blog to record what I felt at the moment! What do you call the kite when its line is broken and is sure to fly away? We call it "a line-broken kite" here; I wonder if it sounds right to you. Thanks.
  

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I am not sure if there is an official term for a kite that has had it's string broken. The term "line-broken kite" makes sense, but I think your sentence is kind of vauge as to what you mean. Was your life as a boy always "like a line-broken kite" or was there some point in your boyhood that your life became like a line-broken kite?

  • I am not sure if there is an official term for a kite that has had it's string broken.
  • The term "line-broken kite" makes sense, but I think your sentence is kind of vauge as to what you mean.
  • Was your life as a boy always "like a line-broken kite" or was there some point in your boyhood that your life became like a line-broken kite?
  • " implies that there was a time in which you could recall what you were like and thus, if a "line-broken kite" represents your life as a boy then was there a point in your boyhood that the "kite" was "near" and you could recall what you were like?
  • In other words, has the "line" always been "broken" or did it become that way at some point in your boyhood?
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I am not sure if there is an official term for a kite that has had it's string broken.

The term "line-broken kite" makes sense, but I think your sentence is kind of vauge as to what you mean. Was your life as a boy always "like a line-broken kite" or was there some point in your boyhood that your life became like a line-broken kite? Your sentence,"It's gone so far away that I can't re

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