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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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A limitless ocean

Please check the following paragraphs. Which is better?
1. Our lives in the world are just like a drop from a limitless ocean. Maybe we have tried to change something. Eventually, we found that our abilities is limited and cannot do anything to help. Therefore, when we are helpless, be an onlooker.

2. Our lives in the world are just like a drop in the sea. Maybe we have tried to change something. Eventually, we found that we are powerless and cannot do anything. Therefore, when we are helpless, be an onlooker.

  

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1. Our lives in the world are just like a drop from a limitless ocean. Maybe we have tried to change something.

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  • Our lives in the world are just like a drop from a limitless ocean.
  • Maybe we have tried to change something.
  • Eventually, we found that our abilities is limited and cannot do anything to help .
  • Therefore, when we are helpless, be an onlooker.
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1. Our lives in the world are just like a drop from a limitless ocean. Maybe we have tried to change something. Eventually, we found that our abilities is limited and cannot do anything to help. Therefore, when we are helpless, be an onlooker.

2. Our lives in the world are just like a drop in the sea. Maybe we have tried to
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1. Our lives are just a drop in a limitless ocean. Maybe we have tried to change something. Eventually, we found that our abilities are limited and cannot do anything. Therefore, when we are helpless, to be an onlooker.

2. Our lives are just like a drop in the sea. Maybe we have tried to change something. Eventually, we found that we are powerless and cannot do
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1. Therefore, when we are helpless, we can only be an onlooker.

2. Therefore, when we are helpless we cannot be anything more than an onlooker.

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