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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A life of a Mr Chan
Please help me to correct them, thanks!!
1 Mr Chan is a hardworking man. He wakes early and starts working at dawn. He has a small stall at a market near his house.
2 He sells chicken and duck meat only at his stall. The price / The prices of meat are cheap and fresh. He also sells / distributes the meat to some famous restaurants. / Some restaurants also order the meat from him.
3 He works from 6.00 a.m. to 4.00 p.m. every day. Many customers like to buy (meat) from him because he serves them friendly and nicely. Although he is tired, he feels satisfied.
1 Mr Chan is a hardworking man. He wakes early and starts working at dawn. He has a small stall at a market near his house.
2 He sells chicken and duck meat only at his stall. The price / The prices of meat are cheap and fresh. He also sells / distributes the meat to some famous restaurants. / Some restaurants also order the meat from him.
3 He works from 6.00 a.m. to 4.00 p.m. every day. Many customers like to buy (meat) from him because he serves them friendly and nicely. Although he is tired, he feels satisfied.
Top answer
1. Fine. 2.
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- Fine.
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- " is also fine.
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1. Fine.
2. You have made 'Prices' the subject, so 'fresh' would apply to it rather than the meat, so perhaps use instead:
"His meat is cheap but fresh." or "The prices of his meat are cheap, but the meat is fresh."
"He also sells meat to some famous restaurants." but "Some famous restaurants also order meat from him." is also fine.
3. Although 'friendly' is
2. You have made 'Prices' the subject, so 'fresh' would apply to it rather than the meat, so perhaps use instead:
"His meat is cheap but fresh." or "The prices of his meat are cheap, but the meat is fresh."
"He also sells meat to some famous restaurants." but "Some famous restaurants also order meat from him." is also fine.
3. Although 'friendly' is
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