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Meela Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
A letter to friend
I heard that you had came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in Calgry Canada.How was it done.You had written in your previous letter that you were seacjomg a job . As for as my concern that you had gone there as a immigrant and you got the immigrant visa . It was your prime goal to live and work there and educate your kids. How did you change your mood so quickly.
I heard that Calgry is the most beautiful city and worth seeing. There are so many job opportunities for immigrant. It is not a easy task that somebody easity adjust or accumudated to new country .I hope you would get a job in a software house but you did show patient. I know you are so talented genious person and have a vast experience in computer industry.
Why dont you asked my opion on that seriou issue. I would recommend you to stay there and not come back. Dont worry you have a immgrant visa you have to go there any time. Please do change your mind go there again with new enthusiam. I am sure you will succeed.
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I heard that Calgry is the most beautiful city and worth seeing. There are so many job opportunities for immigrant. It is not a easy task that somebody easity adjust or accumudated to new country .I hope you would get a job in a software house but you did show patient. I know you are so talented genious person and have a vast experience in computer industry.
Why dont you asked my opion on that seriou issue. I would recommend you to stay there and not come back. Dont worry you have a immgrant visa you have to go there any time. Please do change your mind go there again with new enthusiam. I am sure you will succeed.
Please correct where necessary.
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First, go through your letter yourself and fix all your obvious typing mistakes. Then we will check it for you.
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I heard that you came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in . How was it done? You had written in your previous letter that you were searching a job. I seemed that you went there as an immigrant and you got the immigrant visa. It was your prime goal to live and work there and educate your kids. How did you change your mood so quickly?
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I heard that you came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in Calgary Canada. How was it done? [No meaning!] You had written in your previous letter that you were searching a job. I seemed that you went there as an immigrant and you go
I heard that you came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in Calgary Canada. How was it done? [No meaning!] You had written in your previous letter that you were searching a job. I seemed that you went there as an immigrant and you go
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